The Template Deck

Alright so here are the rules for posting on this topic:

1) This is the template deck to which you'll all suggest improvements.
2) Suggest anything you want and how would it help the deck.
3) Also, the deck is a tool box, which is the perfect template deck.
4) We will be able to see how far this deck goes in terms of developing.
5) Once you've read the rules, you can begin.
6) Suggest your opinions to the "developed deck" because that's where I'll keep the progress.

Number of times developed = 1
Wins, Draws and Losses of the Developed Deck:
Developed Deck (40) vs Gravekeeper's Deck (40) 0-1
Developed Deck (40) vs Jurrac Deck (40) 1-0 (BTW, Justice Bringer is the best)
Developed Deck (40) vs Dragunity (42) 0-1 (Didn't have a thing to destroy Ravine)
Developed Deck (40) vs Random Deck with Kuribohs (42) 1-0 (Lol of course I won)

Writer's Comment on the deck so far:
The evolved deck seems to lack control over the opponent. I am usually able to summon a monster in a turn, but it gets destroyed by higher level monsters. I would say this deck would work well with more 1 for 1 destruction cards such as Smashing Ground or Fissure, as well as some protecive Traps like Bottomless Trap Hole and cards that stop Mass Destruction of those same Traps like Starlight Road.

Deck List:

Monsters (18):
D.D. Warrior x1
Giant Rat x3
Exiled Force x2
E-Hero Wildheart x3
Field-Commander Rahz x2
Koa'ki Meiru Bergzak x2
Justice Bringer x1
Amazoness Chain Master x2
Warrior Lady of the Wasteland x2

Spells (11):
Mystical Space Typhoon x2
Heavy Storm x1
Dark Hole x1
Monster Reborn x1
Pot of Duality x3
Book of Moon x1
Nobleman of Crossout x2

Traps (11):
Gravity Bind x2
Torrential Tribute x1
Solemn Warning x2
Solemn Judgment x1
Magic Drain x2
Seven Tools of the Bandit x1
Dimensional Prison x2


The Developed Deck

Monsters (19):
D.D. Warrior x1
Giant Rat x3
Exiled Force x2
E-Hero Wildheart x3
E-Hero Stratos x1
Field-Commander Rahz x2
Koa'ki Meiru Bergzak x2
Justice Bringer x1
Amazoness Chain Master x2
Warrior Lady of the Wasteland x2

Spells (14):
Mystical Space Typhoon x2
Heavy Storm x1
Dark Hole x1
Monster Reborn x1
Pot of Duality x3
Book of Moon x1
Nobleman of Crossout x2
Reinforcement of the Army x1
E - Emeregency Call x2

Traps (7):
Torrential Tribute x1
Solemn Warning x2
Solemn Judgment x1
Seven Tools of the Bandit x1
Dimensional Prison x2
So get cracking!

Okay...hmmm

-2 Gravity Binds
-2 Magic Drain

+2 e calls
+1 rota
+1 stratos

Alright, I updated my first post so you can post futher comments on the deck